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Softly speaks the voice of treason,
Spreading lies without a reason.
Dark abounds in shadow's wake,
The lies seep in the mids to break.

Treading words on fragile ground,
The truth is there yet never found.
Slowly does the real seem lost,
Beneath the false like winter's frost.

Falsehoods play upon the wall,
Claiming that they're knowing all.
Trying to deceive our minds,
The bells corruption, thrice to chime.

Reflected from a world of fear,
The jester's face now seems to leer.
Sunk within the world of spies,
Of petty truths and covert lies.
©2004-2009 ~SacrificeMe
:iconsacrificeme:

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yet another piece of work inspired by my favourite poet, undacova-sinna

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:iconleila-scarletdemon:
wow... that is beautiful... I really don't know how you do it... all your poems are so amaing. :heart:

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Mmm....fruit acids...:petting:
:iconyunalesca-strife:
Treading words on fragile ground,
The truth is there yet never found.
Slowly does the real seem lost,
Beneath the false like winter's frost.

hmmmmm kinda sounds familiar doesnt it? some how it speaks to me. i really like this. you ended it well and yea....very clean cut and neat piece. (that doesnt make much sense)
:iconundacova-sinna:
its beautiful i don't know how my work kan inspire such beauty if i could write half that wel i wuld be proud to be an inspiration to neone.......U INSPIRE ME!! it shuld b that way round. U have like Ted Hughes, Robert Frost potential. Fuken miraculous work...

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no1 is a virgin the world screws us all
:iconsacrificeme:
um...:blushes: wow thank you so much :blushes: ...aheh ^^; i inspire you and you inspire me...AHA! sounds like a cue for another colab! =P or maybe i cud write a song...or BOTH!! D:D

thanx again! :hug:

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:) + (:angered: + :spork:) = :fork:

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:iconaksumi:
incredible. i really enjoy your work, and this is completely relatable, everyone has felt this way. on a lighter note: XP you rock at rhyming... not fair! ^^

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I'm off to see a man about a fish.
:iconmelbel:
Reflected from a world of fear,
The jester's face now seems to leer.
Sunk within the world of spies,
Of petty truths and covert lies.


:D fweee! great poem--i love the twists of wording you used and the rhyme is awesome! above is my favorite part :D

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I didn't say that we ought to misbehave just look as if we could.----unknown
:iconblue-rhapsody:
Very good! I loves it! I will have to fav it. :) It speaks to me. Very well done and it rhymes. That makes me so happy. Free verse and really dark stuff is all I gotten recently. Thanks for a rhyming not to dark poem :hug:
:iconsapphireflame:
Reflected from a world of fear,
The jester's face now seems to leer.
Sunk within the world of spies,
Of petty truths and covert lies.

so many lines in this appeal to me but i think the last stanza is my fav - so, so true. I think i'm gonna have to fave this
:iconmaliciousmisery:
great as always ^.^ your stoof is all like proffesionalish ness ness ness

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Me:Why do rich people always eat gross things like snails, frog legs, and fish eggs? ~ADoseOfInsanity: Why don't they just go to a pond and start suckin'?

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